Sulphuric, burning mongrel,
Look inside the eyes of a dead sun.
There’s no ashes there,
No escape.
Crimson
Bleeding boulder,
Find earth to amend.
Bleeding lava,
You’re bleeding lov-a,
You are bleeding love.
Sulphuric, burning mongrel,
Look inside the eyes of a dead sun.
There’s no ashes there,
No escape.
Crimson
Bleeding boulder,
Find earth to amend.
Bleeding lava,
You’re bleeding lov-a,
You are bleeding love.
“you are bleeding love” oh this!
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😊Oh, thank you. Glad you liked it.
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Love your play on words!
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I have liked all of your work so far but I think I like this one best in that it’s a quick, powerful read! It left me wondering what I had just read…and I had to read it again. That’s a good thing! It’s something I’ll remember!
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I’m so glad you think that. Because these types of poems are my favorite, they are the ones I like best when I write them compared to he others. I feel connected to something otherworldly when I do. So thanks.
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Yes that’s the feeling I got, it was a flash of magic so bright I had to do a double take. See if you can write more like these because you definitely have a knack for it!
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Ah. Amazing. Thank you. Means a ton. I write them sparsely since they don’t get the same response as others, but you just convinced me I should give them a chance. Like I said, they are my favorite thing, they feel like a purge/an expression of something primal, authentic and honest.
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If you write more, share them with me! I would love to read them.
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I definitely will. You want me to refer you to one and you can tell me it is in the same vein?
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Yes! I would love that!
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You can read this https://sandyauthor.wordpress.com/2017/01/01/inard/
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Or this https://sandyauthor.wordpress.com/2018/04/08/om/
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It’s wonderful! Again, sorry for being late! I’m trying to make a habit of replying to things again! My attention span is just all over the place… >_>
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Again, don’t worry about it too much.
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And thanks for the feedback. 😊
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Thanks a lot. I appreciate it.
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